Erotica – Pleasing You

This is the first time we’ve featured the work of XXXBlackBook member brianthehammer. This may be his first erotica post, but we’re certain it won’t be the last.
Pleasing You
By brianthehammer
As we are walking down the corridor, the only thoughts rolling through my head are ones of sorrow. Knowing that you’re leaving in the morning only deepens the feeling. After a wonderful, possibly perfect date, these are not the feelings I wanted to leave your presence with. Almost to your hotel room I realize we have not said a word since we entered the building. I look over hoping to see your face doused in the same emotions I am feeling, only to find something completely different. The look of a tiger before it takes down its prey was the look I found on your face. I was trying to find something to say as that thought processed. A millisecond before the words came out my mouth you pounced on me. You push me against the wall, grinding your body on mine, inviting me to drink from your sweet, voluptuous lips. My mind cleared of all thoughts, instincts and desires controlling my every move.
I slide my hands to the small of your back pulling you farther into me, rough enough so you felt it but light enough so you melted into me. Kissing you was the closest taste of heaven a man could get on earth. My body demanded more, much, much more. Through the labored breathing and kissing I somehow managed the next few words out. Asking you where your room key was. With one hand you shuffle through your purse, taking only a few seconds yet somehow feeling like an eternity you pull it out. Sliding it into the door, we both stumbled in. After dropping your purse, it was like a race to see who could get their shirt off faster. After our shirts landed on the floor I pushed you on the bed. Mounting you gently I kiss you passionately, only stopping so I could investigate further down. Laying on you so you can feel how hard I am, I push your head side ways so I can kiss and nibble down your neck.
Kissing down your neck until I find your collar bone, I reach behind you and start undoing your bra. While that’s happening your bra strap is my path. I kiss down the strap till I start kissing up your breasts, my tongue flickering lightly across your skin while I’m kissing. I rub my face lightly between your breasts before starting up the other side. When I finally find your other collar bone I slide your bra off. Starting at the top I run my fingers lightly across your left breast, coming close but not touching the nipple yet, as my lips gently caress your other breast. Tongue flicking, lightly nibbling I make my way around your breast. Finally finding my treasure, I slide my tongue in circles around your nipple, pulling off only to blow cold air on them. As my lips part and I allow your nipple in my mouth, my tongue starts to swirl. While this is happening my other hand is on the same mission, just a different breast. Gently rubbing your nipple hearing you start to moan makes me want to jump the gun. Taking a deep breath, I continue on but I slowly start to grind on you. Moving my hand underneath your head, gently but firmly grabbing some hair I pull you closer to me, drinking in your wonderful kiss. Your kiss tells me I must go on for both of our sakes.
I kiss your left breast, then the right, finally finding my trail in the middle. Kissing down your stomach till I find your pants line. Undoing your button, I look into your eyes as I slowly unzip your pants sliding them down just a little bit. I find your hip bone on the left, caressing it, kissing it, biting it just a little. I follow the lace across your boy shorts to your right side, giving that hip the same treatment. Finally knowing I can not take much more, I stand up and slowly slide your jeans off. Grabbing your right leg, I start kissing from your calf down. Stopping only to nibble or allow my tongue to wonder before continuing on. Getting on my knees I spread your legs even farther. Kissing all the way down your thigh till I found your boy shorts again. I kiss up them to the top of your thigh, teasing you, till your hands found the back of my head. Leading my head where you want it. I look up and whisper, “Almost,” then dip my head back down. You’re so wet I can almost taste you from here. Breathing hot breathe on your moist mound. Finally you almost whimper to me, “I can’t take this any more,” and start to take off your boy shorts. Throwing them to the side and pulling my head in closer and you spread your legs more. To your dismay I don’t dive in. I run my tongue along your outer lips, teasing you yet again. Around and around till I find your inner lips. I let my tongue momentarily slide between them only to find a sweet taste lingering on my tongue. I stop my self though, heading north about an inch finding my goal. Your body starts to quiver oh so lightly as my tongue starts to flicker across your clit. Feeling your hand pull my hair in pleasure only excites me more. With a constant rhythm my tongue rotates between flickering across your clit and doing laps around it. Then I slowly slide two fingers inside you, feeling your back arch I know it was the right move. They slowly yet constantly slide in and out. Hearing your breathing get labored and slight moans I know you’re on your way to an orgasm. Speeding both up just a little but till I hear you moan, “That’s the spot, please don’t stop,” and I have no intention on stopping till you cum.
Then wildly you pull my hair and scream, “I’m about to cum.” Feeling your body quiver and start to move around I know it’s true. Then you start to scream, stopping only to almost hold your breath, then you let out a sigh and your body sinks back into the bed. Your sweetness fills my mouth as you relax. I wipe my mouth and stand up telling you, “Don’t relax yet, I have not even started.” I slide down my pants and boxers with one swift move, feeling your gaze on my member. I lay down next to you nibbling your ear whispering, “Not yet baby.” I gently roll you over on your stomach, getting on top of you so your hips are between my knees. I push all your hair so one side, kissing the back of your neck as I start to massage your shoulders. I massage your shoulders and back, while I make a trail down your spine with my tongue. My tongue ends at your lower back, but my kissing and nibbling starts there. About half way up your back, you push me off and get on top of me. You reach down, running your hand up and down my member for a second, gently caressing it before guiding it inside you. With one hand you reach out and brace your self on my shoulder while I slowly enter you. Then stopping you about half way in, I start to rock back and forth, only allowing that half to slide in and out. You look hungrily into my eyes telling me no more teasing. I just smile and keep going. Finally after maybe a minute of that I pull you close to me and slam all the way in. Gasping for breath, your body seems to caress mine as the shock wears off.
Looking into my eyes you start to slide up and down with a slight back and forth motion as well. My hands use your hips as handles, pushing you farther down every time you go down. After a few minutes you start to slow down. Taking this as my queue, I roll over getting on top of you. Pushing your head to the side with mine, I start to bite your shoulders as I’m sliding in and out of you. Getting more into the moment I reach up to the base of your neck, my hand sliding up just a little more to find a hand full of hair, not yanking it but lightly pulling it as I slide in out. Feeling your legs wrap around me, you pull me closer so you can kiss me. Keeping your eyes open, you rest your lips on mine. Just feeling each other breathe. Keeping my eyes open I press my lips harder against yours, kissing you trying to convey all the passion I feel through my eyes and kiss. You push me off gasping for breath, lips quivering with uncertainty. I ask, “What’s a matter” and you whisper, “That might have been the best kiss I have ever had.” Not missing a heart beat as you pull me in closer for an even longer bout of kissing. Towards the end I start to slide in and out slowly, somehow matching the rhythm of our kissing. You push me up and grab me at the same time. Moaning, “That’s the spot please don’t stop!” Of course I don’t, only moaning out as well “If I don’t stop I’m going to cum too.” You just wrap your legs around me portraying your message of don’t stop very well. With one final thrust I see your body relax, your toes uncurl, your breathing slow down, and you close you eyes. I collapse on you because my body felt so spent. I roll off of you, laying my head on a pillow. Pulling you closer to me felt so right. You laid your head on my chest humming a song I did not know, falling asleep to me playing with your hair. Me falling asleep listening to your breathing, as it always should be.

Thank you, that’s so close to describing part of one of my most memorable nights this year x